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第二句和第三句可以改為一句話：Although it's a small city ,there are many mountains and rivers. 接著this is my hometown,I have lived there for 17 years.
下一段My hometown is Quzhou Zhejiang province I was born in there. My hometown is famous for Citrus Changshan-HuYou and stone. HuYou is one of MY favourite fruits.Although it tastes some sweet, some sour, I like it very much. And, it can make HuYou dry, HuYou tea and preserved fruit. It not only food but also natural health product. My hometown's another name is Stone city. It have different stone, small, big, large. There have anything that one expects to find

It is a beautiful city, even it’s a small city. There are mountains and rivers. IThis is my hometown, I live here for 17 years.
I’m born in here, My hometown is in Quzhou Zhejiang province. It is famous for Citrus Changshan-HuYou and stone. HuYou is one of the fruit. It tastes a little sweet and sour, I like it very much. And, it can make HuYou dry, It not only belongs to food but also is a natural health product. Another name of my hometown is Stone city. My hometown has different stones, small ones or big ones. There is everything that one can expect to look for.
I love my hometown. I enjoy this kind of living in my place, Welcome come.
HuYou tea and preserved fruit.這句你想說什么？你自己看看吧。