關(guān)于,一篇上高一的學(xué)姐給初三弟弟妹妹的建議,,一篇英語作文？

I'm a senior three student.As your senior,I have some suggestions to the young.
To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.(As old saying goes,"all work and noplay makes Jack a dull boy.)"
Moreover, you should get alone well with others.(To have more friends, not enemies)
Last but not least,you could be active in school team work.(Ability is as important as your study,you can also enjoy your colouful school life as well)
I hope these suggestions could make your senior schoollife more wonderful.
因絕悔為畝罩是作文，所以并耐正我加了一些內(nèi)容。括號里。