自己用英語寫的日記，希望有人改錯。

英語中沒有冒號， 應換成逗號

Nobody 陪me to study dancing這句話完全不對，No one expect to learn dancing with me

Can you應換成Could you please或Will you

too many 換成so many

陪伴accompany或in company with

continue

惶恐afraid,anxious

I won't do it改成I beg for your understanding

答應promise

Why do all people pick up me only when they are ?under the shadow of their own

Why do I never have ?courage to exclude the others

樓上回答比較多的兩位我都看了，或多或少都有不妥的地方。恕我直言，文章本身價值就不高，我是在盡量給你把語句改成不chiglish，寫完后，自己翻譯一下，不覺得這樣的作文很觸動笑點嗎？多看看優(yōu)秀作文吧，寫作文需要結構的，把句子寫正確，其次才是語法，詞匯。

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